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Pediatric E.R, R.I.P 11/5/09 (a drowning)

I watched…
A heartbreaking scene today
But I couldn’t tear
my eyes away

I watched …
I feel shamed to say
I watched
a little boy die today

I watched …
an anguished EMT cry
I watched nurses drawn faces
I watched a little boy die

I watched …
Just outside the doors
The Frantic CPR applied
With frantic, futile force

I watched
Her mother fearfully enter the room
To be seated by his side
To share in his impending doom

I watched
A strange, unsettling scene
Upturned faces as if in prayer
hopefully watch the vitals screen

I watched
A life dissipate and fade
On a bed
That I had newly made

I watched…
At least a half hour they tried
wondrous machines, marvelous medicines
Yet still, this little boy died

I watched…
Then I heard a small whimpering cry!
But It was only the mother
As she saw her child die

I watched…
His arms outspread, his mom at his side
Young staring eyes so angelicly appealing
a part of me then, also died
I watched, I watched
then I cried...

Sad and Moving

One of the hardest subjects in life to face and write about, you have done it with such skill and compassion. Well done.

Jill

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David o Whalen Thanks Jill, the Doctors, nurses and EMTs are amazing.

You really cptured our hearts...

So sad... you really cptured our hearts with this emotiona,l well done write!

Good job!

Ray AKA Yobarney

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David o Whalen Thanks Ray, I didn't know if writing about this was the right thing to do.

So heart wrenching

How sad David. For everyone!

i'm crying too.
Linda

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David o Whalen At least 20 men and women in that room also cried. Thanks Linda.

extremely moving

and very well done, a pleasure to read. raskin

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David o Whalen Thanks Raskin. This was a painful piece to write.

wow

Im going to have say this was beautifully written, honestly it touched my heart and also brought back memories..well written*bre*

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David o Whalen Thanks Bre, and sorry for the memories

So sad a poem

But beautifully written, as I am blinking back tears. Thank you for sharing.

April

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David o Whalen Apryl you are my bestest reader.

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