The Rambler
Enchanting, enticing,
Cool and inviting,
The bank by the ash and the stream,
Below birds that are nesting,
A rambler lays resting,
Sundrenched, alone in his dreams.
The trees and grass singing,
As the sun beats down, bleaching,
Relaxed in the warmth of his rest,
Under blue cloudless sky,
He lets out a sigh,
Knows that days such as these, he is blessed.
Miles from his world,
That is knotted and knurled,
With nature he feels so at peace,
Escape to the hills,
With no comforts or frills,
Is his valve for anxiety release.
- David Gibbs's blog
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Nice write, David. There's a
Nice write, David. There's a nice freedom and roaming type of vibe going on here. It's also a very tranquil feeling piece. It makes me want to travel aimlessly. Peace, NSF
Thank You NSF
Glad you enjoyed, as for travelling aimlessly, I could certainly go for that! As long as there's sunshine!
Thanks again for reading and commenting,
Dave
I really like this poem
I can picture everything you wrote about. Nicely written. I wish I could write like that.
Rylee
Thanks Rylee
I'm glad you like this piece, think everyone needs a place to escape to now and again, thanks for reading and commenting, very appreciated,
Dave
Relaxing
This was a very relaxing read, very enjoyable, easy to imagine the scene. An excellent write mate.
Andrew
Thanks Andrew
Glad you enjoyed, many thanks for reading and commenting,
Dave
brilliant David
I loved this one sounds like an ideal place to me , a lovely poem well written hugs from Willow
Thanks Willow
Sounds pretty good to me too.......do you know where it is? Lol
Thanks for reading and commenting,
Dave
very nice read
You've painted an enjoyable scene. Good choice of words. I like the rhythm of it too. Consistently good poetry! Cheers.
Many Thanks Poetmaster
Glad you enjoyed, appreciate the read and comment, many thanks,
Dave
God, I feel....
Relaxed!!! what a great way to start the day!
David, your poetry always amazes me. Your choice of words are put together in perfect harmony.
Nice, write. More please?
Linda
:)
Linda
You are a charmer!! Lol.
What a lovely comment, thank you my friend,
Dave