Remember?
Something that I read,
Reminded me of you today,
Thoughts returned
That had been buried away,
I got to thinking
Of the smile that you had,
The one that you gave me
When I was a lad,
Do you remember the walks?
When you met me from work,
Do you remember the rose?
I felt such a jerk,
Do you remember the spark?
Shared between me and you,
That magnetic aura?
Do you remember? I do,
I remember I took my dads car,
And drove down the street,
To the place where we said,
That you and I would meet,
I remember your face lit,
By the streetlight above,
I remember trying to stop myself
Falling in love.
You gave me that smile,
The one that said so much,
My heart banging inside,
You were close enough to touch,
We drove to the beach,
To a quiet hotel bar,
We sat and had drinks
While a guy played guitar,
When I looked in your eyes
Breath got stuck in my chest,
When I was with you,
I felt truly blessed,
You rocked my world
To foundation and core,
Your beauty, your presence,
I simply adore,
I wish that I'd told you,
I wish that I'd said,
All the feelings of love
That whirled through my head,
But I didn't say anything,
How typically me,
If I had, this could have been
A different story.
- David Gibbs's blog
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Awesome
This is beautiful david.So romantic and touching.I love it.A good write.Makes me believe their are still men with a heart.
Gloria
Thank You Gloria
I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, very much appreciated,
Dave
lovely,Your love poems are
lovely,Your love poems are so beautiful
Thanks mimi
I'm very happy that you found it lovely. Love poems don't seem to be that easy to write, thank you for taking the time to read and comment,
Dave
Love Sweet Love....
Sweet love poem Dave. I love seeing this side of you. You are really good at it. An easy, breezy flow to this one too!
Beautiful write
Linda
Thanks Linda
For the charming comment, I'm very pleased you like this piece, your comments are very much appreciated,
Dave
Moving
I found this really moving Dave, and a little sad. I guess i wanted you to go back and tell her your true feelings. Good write!
Thanks Debs
I guess it is a little sad, but don't worry, I didn't cry! Lol
Thank you for reading and commenting, always appreciated,
Dave
:)
Amazing how you can recall each detail...yes, that heart banging inside...as if you are about to have a heart attack...that's the same kind LOL...Very romantic Mr.Gibbs...
- heaven
Thank You Heaven
When it's special to you, it's not so hard to remember. Thanks for reading, your comments always appreciated,
Dave
A good write
A good write Dave, I think plenty of us can relate to regrets like this.
Andrew
I Think You're Right
I expect everybody has a story somewhere, thanks for taking the time to read and comment,
Dave