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sculpted from a fevered mind
focused on a point of peace
found within a bed of snow
feel the grip of life release

within the warmth of winter
when the forests fall asleep
encasing man in ice to make
the masterpiece complete

Good Stuff!

This is a great piece of work zachery. Almost minimalist in approach. I like the ending, nicely done.

Deborah

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Simply Beautiful! Thank you for sharing. Ezmerelda.

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I'm happy you enjoyed it, and thank you for the comment. It means a lot.

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