“The Passionate Sting”

She playfully rubs me, kissing and biting
The light caressing her, she looks so inviting
She whispers sweet things as we touch and flirt
As she lights the flame she says “you’ll love the hurt”
My energy rises, with erotic thoughts my mind fills
I’m already enjoying this as my excitement builds
In the dim light I watch intently, I see the first drip
The shinny opaque tear drop seductively leaves the candles tip
It falls through the air, that luscious drop
My mind reeling, my heart racing, this I can not stop
It seems to hang for a moment before it finds my hip
I watch the candle as it forms the next drip
Finally I feel the first one as the second hits my skin so bare
At first the absence of heat, but then .. Oh yes, I can feel it there
Breathing through my teeth, this experience so hot
Gyrating hips, writhing fingers as wax hits that spot
Eyes closed now waiting for what the next drop will bring
Each one makes me want more of this alluring sting
The drips come one by one, each burn with some intensity at first
Twitching and squirming, absorbing the sensations, my body quenches its thirst
She moves the candle around my body, where will she go
Gorgeous hands work gently, the trail of wax they follow
Feeling intense, erotic and relaxed at the same time
Her hands rubbing, fingers gently removing the cooled wax left behind.
Those beautiful fingers lifting wax from this torso of mine
This vision above me that the light adores, she looks so very fine
My sexy woman with hot wax, both have their sensual burn
Excitement grows, waves wash over me in anticipation of my turn!

© 2009 Guy Hoffman

good one

This was really good,liked it a lot!

Ricklovin

Thanks Ricklovin!

Thanks for looking Rick. I appreciate you!

creative365 / Guy Hoffman
http://www.flickr.com/creative365

All I say is...

... Go Write Your Book, I'll Paint Your Cover! :-)
Soni

Now thats an offer....

I can not refuse! Soni I would be honored if you would paint my cover!! You are the best!

creative365 / Guy Hoffman
http://www.flickr.com/creative365

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