UNTOUCHABLE

They build a wall around your heart.
and they put you in an ivory tower.
Stuffed it full of imitation art.
the new lady of a superpower.

The gold and diamonds adorn you,
amongst your silken gowns.
and bold knights obey and swear to,
caress your human crown.

So come down from your pedestal.
back to the land of your birth.
where there is a wishing well,
near the shack man first found wealth.

Wow

A brilliant use of words allows you to create an image in your head of what you're reading...superb.

THANKFUL REPLY

Thank you very much!im glad you liked this one.and i will soon be going over all your own gems.cheers.

Oooh!

Don't mention it, I look forward to hearing what you think about my writes...thank you! Jewel ♥

Another very good write

Clydeseer you have excelled yourself with this one also you are the best barber Bard in town and you can cut my hair anyday, loved this one big hugs from Willow

THANKING THE HEADMISSTRESS.

WHY SHUCKS.YOU MAKE MY DAY AGAIN WILLOW!THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT

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