Evening Walks
Along the trail of gray and mist,
I walked a mile at nightfall.
My eyes were set toward the distance,
A hazy field of gloom.
The course was dense and for a while,
I shook the path, I trampled on
Just then I saw, upon my footprints,
There rose a scented flame.
My shadow hopped as night persisted
This midnight fog I got collected
I saw fireflies flown across the channel
Came rushing through my hair.
Charmed by the night delighted & awakened
Flickering light suspended in midair
But then at time when dawn succeeded
The scent and fireflies dashed toward the moon.
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very beautiful, a different look at a hazy, gloomy morning. Very nice
achieve your best
stephen
thanks for reading and for you kind words! i just come around now after 2 months break. Gone from a holiday at home. Got inspired by the nature there.
welcome to the site!
clairejane
very pretty write
Love this clairejane...especially the last stanza!
A beautiful scene
Linda
Linda, T.Y.
manythnaks for the kind words!
claire
Evening Walks
Lovely to be reading more of your poetry Clairejane,
Nature indeed, is a beautiful thing!
Debs
xx
Thanks Debs
Indeed!
Claire