could've been a mountain's plea
Walk, run, and ascend,
Touch and kiss my pristine soul,
But leave me unscathed!
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Walk, run, and ascend,
Touch and kiss my pristine soul,
But leave me unscathed!
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Perfect
I really like this haiku, it hits the spot straight away, especially the words you've used. Brilliant!
Jewel
Thanks for reading this and for leaving your kind comment!
God Bless,
clairejane
My Pleasure
Don't mention it, I'm glad to comment on poems that are as unique as yours.