All I Ask
How abysmally you failed,with your tragic spit of words
I smiled at your efforts,and then continued watching birds
You kept your own self company,while I just closed my ears
How abysmally you failed,to curse me with your fears
Why such bitterness and hatred,how do you sleep at night
I wondered of your coldness,as I watched the birds take flight
You are chained to your own demons,and yet you hold the key
Why such bitterness and hatred,when you've another choice to be
When did you cease caring,where did you leave your heart
Why did all your dreams fade,whats torn your soul apart
Don't you know I care enough,I'm holding out my hand
Can't you tell I'm reaching out,I want to understand
Did you see the birds before,holding freedom on their wings
You too could rise above all this and know the peace it brings
Ok I'll just sit quietly and you can release all of your hurt
All I ask is when you're done,will you try to see the birds
Chenoa Shiningwater
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Loved this one
Chenoa this was a very good write ,I realy enjoyed reading this one, with a touch of nature added,thanks for sending it in, hugs from Willow
Thank you Willow
I am pleased you enjoyed this....and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Again...thank you *smiles*
Listen to all the teachers in the woods. Watch the trees, the animals and all the living things--you ll learn more from them than books ~Joe Coyhis
*winks*
Hello,
I browsed through your poetry and really, this is yet another one of your AWESOME poems^^
I love the way they rhyme and the way how it conveys the messages.
Lovely poetry. Well Done.
Zerga
Again...I am humbld by your
Again...I am humbld by your kindness
This piece was written about a friend who would often burden her "backpack" with bitterness.
Thanks for reading and commenting Zerga
(((hugs)))
Listen to all the teachers in the woods. Watch the trees, the animals and all the living things--you ll learn more from them than books ~Joe Coyhis
These words
drip with your soul Chen.
All I Ask,
is that you never change.
Your voice is like a lighthouse,
in the fog.
Cristo :)
You are amazing.... It is
You are amazing....
It is true that even in commenting,you are a heart with a pen attached.
*big smiles*
P.S. I wont...if you wont ;)
Listen to all the teachers in the woods. Watch the trees, the animals and all the living things--you ll learn more from them than books ~Joe Coyhis