love =death
LOVE = DEATH
Carlos Palomares
I know that I have hurt you,
and it is my fault.
I know that I have hurt you,
And I truly know it’s my fault
I’m sorry for what I have done.
My love I know that I have hurt you! I reach over and on top of my
Shelf I find the Funniest picture of you and I.
I then realize love hurts
if you were here next to me instead
Of that other Creep! I would hold you tight and make
You love me once again,
But I know this won’t happen, so I lay in bed
With my door locked with a knife in my
Hand talking to GOD!
Oh god why have you put me on earth I have found no happiness,
but I have found Death!
I know you have told me many times before that you
Loved me but I realize you really don’t you have
Left me. I shake for you, I cry for you but no matter
What I do you won’t be here, but my love
My heart dies every second in till it
Reaches it’s finally point
Your voice well make me live a few seconds longer but not let me live
Having you love me will make me leave in peace with the darkness
Out of me. You loving me will make me brighter than ever oh
Please oh please ill grow stronger by your side and grow
Happier than ever But I know this won’t happen so I
Lay in bed with my door locked with a knife in my
Hand talking to GOD!
Oh god why have you put me on earth I have found
No happiness but I have found death!
My love I know that I have hurt you
And I truly know it’s my fault
But cry no more my presence is no longer here on this
Dreadful earth I’m in a better world where I could
Be loved by you once again
I know that I have hurt you and I’m sorry….
But death has come to take me away
Away from you death is the thing that is keeping me from loving you
And trying to get you back
I’m sorry
I know that I have hurt you
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My First Broken Heart
Carlos.. Wow is this pure art or real emotions... If so ...I remember the girst time I had my heart broken.. I was soooo in love... It hurts ...it really hurts... I wanted to die and thought about suicide... Somehow I started thimnking about people who loved me (family and friends) and things I wanted to do... QAnd i forced myself to get over it and used it to motvate me into being someone that any women would want to be with... smart, fun, considerate, and a BUFFED, Ripped sex machine... I never did get rich.. but i did alright... and she wanted me back about two years later ...but I was having to much fun then... That was my first broken heart ... it's happpened a few timres since but the first time was the hardest... What does not kill you will make you stronger.. There is so much in this world to see and do... you have no idea the adventures that lie ahead of you ... I promise you if you pick yourself up and let go of all the emotions that you are experiencing right now ... You will one day stop and think back to what you are going through right now... and say .. "Wow... I am loving this ..to think that i wanted to die years ago ... I was sostupid ... i never would have had this great experience if I did"... There is a switch in your head ... only you have the key to turn uit on or off... You can control your brain to accomplish anything in life that you desire... I wonder how President elect Obama felt as a child when his dad (an African thug) annd his mom did not want him ... he was raised by his grandparents... He could have been negative energy mad at the world ... But he decided to do something good with his life... I hope you get through this... I think you will... heree is a poem I wrote for a friend that had her heart broken a year ago... She was with te same guy for 7 years... Yes you are not alone .... there is a Lonely Hearts Club... You are now an honorary member ConGrats... I am the President! Keep writing ... Are you going to change your name every year .... 15 yearold poet 16yearold poet...
Ray AKA Yobarney
Please read this:
Love again
By Raymond F. Baldorossi Jr.
You split apart
You're splitting friends
Your broken hearts
Will love again
You're not the first
You're not the last
Many others
Have had sad pasts
Your growing pains
Are not that fun
We hate sunburn
But love the sun
Just grow with it
And live to learn
Don't grow bitter
Love will return
You live and learn
And learn to live
Measure your love
By what you give
Just live your life
And live to love
And you will go
To heaven above
You're not the last
You're not the first
Many others
Broke the curse
Lose the battle
But win the war
Back on the horse
You’ll lose some more
Back on the horse
Do it again
Keep on trying
And you will win
You already won
Over my heart
I cry for you
Tears me apart
You already won
Over my heart
I give to you
These words of art
You are Light Carlos!
Your words resonate in all of us. I could feel the anguish of your words. Nothing is more painful than a broken heart. I have learned how to deal with a broken heart. This is what I do:
Go to nature, she is waiting.
Listen to the wind.
Set your sights on the blue sky, and the tiny clouds floating above.
Surrender to the love of Mother Earth.
God will talk to you there.
Mother Nature will hold you so gently.
Your cares will surrender to the beauty of the landscape.
A broken heart is like hitting a wall...really hard...really hard! I have learned great lessons from hitting walls. Walls are obstacles that make us better. Yes, broken hearts can make us better! You must consider what lesson you have learned, and pass it on in your poetry. You are loved!
Please be my poetry buddy. I look forward to many more of your poems.
Love,
Kathy Paysen
God loves you, and so do I.
Carlos
I feel for you carlos. everyone remembers their first lost love. Its real hard to take. I think she will always hold a special place for you in her heart because noone forgets a first love. or any love for that matter.
Things will look up i promise you that.
Take care and keep writing . you are really good!
Linda