The Wonder Years

Venturous journies as a child when the world had seemed so new,
All we thought of at the time was what our hearts saw true.
Kaleidoscopes of vivid dreams still funneled in our minds,
Bedazzling when treachery and stress did not confine.
Running with the "Bad News Bears", we traced the neighborhood-
Conjuring our does and dares, not ever up to good.
We'd congregate up in the tree when rains would come to fall,
And flounder when we hear the ringing of that dinner call.
Building spaceships in the gloom, unfurled in sheets of white-
As flashlights flicker room to room, beneath the starry night.
Recalling times within our youth, we'd bundle packs of brew-
Then run into the woods with it, and babble like a zoo.
Coming home to mom and dad {still rolling at the tongue},
Grounded for forever was the sentence that was hung.
That's just a little insight to the freckled wonder years,
Jostling with ageing as we shared our joys and tears.

This is the second time i

This is the second time i just signed in to write a comment on your piece..two great writes ..just took me back to my childhood..always a good place to be .heartfelt thankyou

Again..

Thanks for dropping in again friend »BRYCE

Just Love The Way

I just love the way you string your words together, just takes me to a different dimension. Great Reminiscing.kisses Rebecca

Rebecca..

Your kindness takes me to a different dimension »BRYCE

unbelievably screaming for an AUDIENCE!

I was brung up on radio!and i know listening to this on the arts channels would be in the danger of OVEREXPOSING you!strait to number 1!theres punks on the net who could,nt hold rustle up a spark to light the tinder box of light that will ignite from the candle you hold!yours is not A!candle,its a chandelier!send me all your old boots and cast offfs as i can raffle them for charity when you get crowned at the awards.you are The true BARD OF AMERICAN PEERS OF POETRY.ON YE GO LADDIE!ALL THE BEST O LUKK FAY SCOTIA!

Sir Clyde!

You never fail to make me laugh with these comments lad,, I'll make sure i thank ye first at the award ceremony if i ever get nominated {lolz}.. cheers! From Sir BRYCE

Nice 1 Dude

A very discriptive write again; Maxim

great poem Bryce

I loved this one Bryce a great write as are all your poems ,keep `em coming big hugs from Willow

Thanx Wills

Wow.. I don't know how many thankyou's i could possibly give to show of my appreciation to you my longtime friend~ triplehugs from BRYCE

Max Dude..

Thanks again my trupoets friend »BRYCE

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