Still Alive
I'm still alive though you wished me dead, my words still resonate- and though the poison spun my head, i've shitted out your hate. My pen still scribbles full of ink, with many things to tell- Forgive me, but i missed that speeding train that goes to hell. Ignore me with your beady eyes, puke when you see my name- spit your venom at me now, but i will still remain. Tuck your tail between your legs and leave when i arrive, put away your party kegs, for i am still alive!
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Wow!
This is strong stuff Bryce, who's upset u, not me i hope lol! Keep writing! :.)
Debs..
I was a little upset when i wrote this, not at anyone I will name, but there have been some loose tongues who have left some really shady/disrespectful comments on a couple of writes i had to erase. I'm really falling out of love with the site and some of the blockheads who feel they have to comment just to disparage a writer and chase them away{especially the new ones}.. I feel my line of respect has dwindled short and like others have done before me{will share my fill for this year and be gone by the next}»BRYCE
good tale
of assertment, not allowing yourself to be oppressed. Sometimes the only way people will listen if it is stated clearly and strongly. I thought you accomplished that. raskin
Raskin..
Thanks again friend,, that's exactly what this write was about just telling it like it is and not being gentle about it. Sorry for the late reply{been a little "site-pissed"}, and thanks for your steadfast support to everyone here and never feeling u have to bash anyone with sarcasm»BRYCE
bryce
No, I don't do that. Everyone has a right to their voice and you have a wonderful voice. I can be sarcastic, ironic and very funny but I'm not fond of bashing people for what they write, especially on a site like this. There is a site here for constructive or destructive criticism and we can choose that but for me I prefer to build up and read things like yours that I enjoy. I've often found that if you take the sarcastic at face value it dissipates very rapidly. It can be fun as well. My own two cents do with as you may. raskin
Explosive!
Loved it all especially "shitted out your hate", I think we all need to do that time and again ;Maxim
Max..
Yes we do!.. We don't have to eat their hate/digest it/and let it simmer in there.. just shit it out like the dog does on the front lawn, but not with violent flatulence» BRYCE
Strong Write
I agree with raskins comment, sometimes it just needs to be said. You said it very well. To me it's very strong and measured, good piece,
Dave
David Gibbs
I appreciate the comment and for agreeing with raskin{she always knows the right things to say}»BRYCE
Whats up Bryce
Bryce are you ok, who has upset you tell you poet Godmother and I will sort them out nobody fools around with my God son ,lots of hugz from Willow
Poet Godmother Willow..
Everything's all better now, just with the calming of your words{lolz} i'm not gonna tattle on em now, but the next time they raise their ugly monstroserous heads from beneath the spread, you'll be the first to hear about it^ _ ^hugz from BRYCE
I am Glad Bryce
I was so upset to think you have been a victim to this back stabbing here ,I posted a new poem in and took it out again in case it happens to me Bryce I have had my share of it here ,I think I know who you are talking about,she cant keep getting away with her bitchy writes . she did it to me ,you and Clydeseer if it is the same one you are talking about she doesn`t write poetry her section has only got comments in it so looks like she is only in this to cause torment,anyway I am glad you are ok now Lots of hugz from your God Mother Willow
Empowering Write
I'm very sorry you were victimized by people who feel it's their sworn duty to bring others down, just keep writing from your beautiful heart))-kisses rebecca
Thanx Again Becca
And don't worry about it cause i know i'm not alone here. Soon I'll have shared my fill, and after that they can make any assessments they want about my writes, but i'll have already moved on» BRYCE