Sanctuary

SANCTUARY
BY BRYCE EDWARD COAST

Thy sanctuary towers
Where the night's long hand can't reach
A timeless castle, fixtured
Where no swords could ever breach
It looks down on the vallies
High atop the blinding hills
Enwrapped in golden sunlight
Crawling darkness, never spills
The shadowed wolves had chased me
Up unto it's harbored gates
Where saving hands had fetched me
Safely from their dinner plates
The foes that i had fought with
Through the chasms of my life
Had whimpered off so soundly
To the forests of the night
A solace drifted over
With the lifting of the ramp
As flooding light enclosured
Under God's eternal lamp
A fellowship of patrons
Had there surrounded me
And brought me to my senses
In the halls of trinity
Existing through the centuries
Still standing on it's soles
It's confines will forever be
A safe for wounded souls
The howling squalls and cold nightmares..
I sure have had my share
But I've not heard their bleeding calls
Ring through the quiet air
Thy sanctuary settles here
Up high, on golden hills
Where no long hand can bring me down
Back to those darkened fields

brilliant poem

very well earned plaudits await you pal and this is a masterpeice.bravo...and more power to your pencil,cheers for a very enjoyable read

thankyou..

appreciate the read and comment very much seer, and i will continue putting pencil to paper -BRYCE

Outstanding

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

Bryce,

I haven't read anything as flowing, rhythmic and descriptive as this is quite some time.I felt as though I was right there finding refuge with you "up high on golden hills".
Could this be heaven?

ron

Ron..

Yea.. I may have gotten a little emotionally charged with this write.. but it was what i was feeliing.. thanks BRYCE

A great Poem Bryce

You have just written a masterpiece here Bryce, I truly enjoyed the read very well thought out and written hugs from Willow

Willow...

Thanks my friend... i always enjoy your kind words of approval -BRYCE

Great Write

Great write Bryce, this piece reads well with an easy flow to it. A great write,
Dave

Thanks..

Very much David Gibbs.. appreciate your read and comment- sorry 4 late reply ~BRYCE

really visual

well written, spiritual. I liked in the halls of trinity. Safety and comfort there. You gave this and old world feel. raskin

Thanks Raskin..

Very much for the read and comment...yes, i tried to give it that old world type feel.. sorry 4 late reply ~BRYCE

Nyce=bryce..good one,enjoyed

Nyce=bryce..good one,enjoyed it

Thanks MiMi..

And nyce does = BRYCE.. sorry 4 late reply

Splendid!

This is such a beautiful piece so filled with emotion! I feel like i'm right in that celestial castle with you -kisses rebecca

Thanks Rebecca

Very much for the comment.. sorry 4 late reply ~BRYCE

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