Remembrance of Me
Age to age and heart to heart, circumferencing the seasons
We travel through our seperate lives, living for all their reasons
Subtleties on subtleties recall the likes of you, set-apart by boundless seas.. i wonder how you do?..
Maybe in your woven path, in something that you see
Some reference or hinderancy, might so remind of me
I hope that in the years to come, just like we were back then
I'd look upon my old alum, and still would find a friend.
- Bryce E Coast's blog
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Nice
Nice thoughts bryce.A warm feeling with reading it.Reminded this old hippie that lives in the woods that she should do better at staying in touch with friends.lol
Gloria
Gloria
It must be something beautiful to live amongst nature,, i think just like Robert Frost, there's a simple element that a poet could take from it,, and enhance a poet's eye.. but don't allow it's peaceful confines to keep you from your friends »BRYCE
This is written well
This is written well
thanks
Thanks
Bryce
I'm not sure why I like this but I do, it has a really nice feel to it. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks. raskin
Raskin ^ _ ^
sometimes we just can't pinpoint what it is, but as long as you had that "feel" inside,, that's good enough for me »BRYCE
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whats "alum?and i like your work but i dont see why you felt you needed to amend or change it from the original.is there some reason?anyway,cheers
clydeseer..
I tried to cut alumni short in that line so that it would fit in the verse{i thought if i wrote the whole word it would cram}. I do tend to peer to deep into my writes that's why i frequently alter them, but i do appreciate the question and analysis >BRYCE