Love Is Here

Love is here....
Right here..
To be

Within your reach
No need for key

I shall not ever
Block it's course

No, nevermore
Conceal it's source

In yesterdays
I failed
To see

The faithfulness
That carried me

Please take
This heart
Without misgivings

For all this time
You kept
Me living

Your smile
Enkindled
Through the night

The darkest hours
Of my plight

In selfishness
I turned aside
To seek
The darkness,
I'd reside

But, through it all
I found your face
With all it's beauty..
All it's grace

This love is here
For good..
To stay...

And no dark clouds
Will take away.

Bryce

I take this as a piece about someone very special to you, who has stuck with you, loved you, while you were perhaps going through a very rough time. Reads like you might have made it fairly difficult for her to love you, but she still did. The good thing is that you realise this now, and will make damn sure you keep hold of her.
That's how I read this piece, it's an excellent piece and a beautiful tribute to your love!
Dave

Yes It Is...

It's amazing how selfish we can be when we're depressed... we won't let anything(not even love that's right in front of our faces to pierce through).. thanks for read/comment BRYCE

this reads

really well, nice easy flow to it, the content is lovely. raskin

Raskin..

Thanks again, for another nice comment... BRYCE

bewtiful as always

I just love the way you can string words together -kisses rebecca

Rebecca ^ _ ^

i just love the way you love my work and how you comment,., you should try sharing more so i can lather up your poems with nice comments ~BRYCE

lovely tribute...and its a

lovely tribute...and its a wise man who realizes the value of such a love as this...

Mi^ _ ^Mi

Thanks.... when you come out the other end of the tunnel, you realize that life's so much bigger than just your sadness
~BRYCE

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