Loose-Leaf Pages
Loose-leaf pages quaver on the fertile orchard tree, upsprouting from the sockets that had held the autumn leaves.
Pages freely posturing for passing eyes to see, the solemn feelings that had neatly wrote a diary.
You wouldn't mind if i stopped by and plucked a page to read, since afterall they're floating nigh, my hands won't shop with greed.. Would you be so unsettled if i've seen you write my name, if i confessed so bluntly that i write of you the same?.. I read the passage where you cryed for wings to help you fly, so you could soar to reach that lonely star up in your sky. That yonder place, so far away, you dreamed to run-off to... what if i said sincerely that my heart had dreamt there too?.. I wander through the writings of the girl who lives next door, decoding hallowed scriptures that i'd never seen before. Skimming branch to branch within her sacred blossomed tree,, while in the shadows of my own she sits and reads of me
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Romantic
And very creative aswell! I love the thought of looseleaf pages sprouting in place of the falling autumn leaflets )) and being able to read someone elses private thoughts as if they were growing off of trees, just perfect for this time of year ))Rebecca
beautiful words
I loved this one Bryce well written and a beautiful poem from start to finish.hugs from Willow
Rebecca/Divena
Thankyou very much my friends, that's exactly what i was driving at »BRYCE
Interesting
story of two people, separated but thinking about the other without knowledge only a sense of longing. I think you did a great job with your words at bringing that out. Enjoyed reading it, thanks. raskin
on target..
That's exactly what I was trying to get at in this poem raskin, i'm glad that you understood it »BRYCE«
Nice
Nice
Nyce
=Bryce
GREAT POEM
CONGRADULATIONS!THIS IS TERIFIK STUFF AND IM GLAD I STUMBLED ONTO THIS SITE.LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF THE SAME QUALITY AS THIS.CHEERS
SAME 2 U SIR
THE COMMENT AND TOAST IS MUCH APPRECIATED HERE ~B.E.Coast
A True Beauty!
A beautifully secretive romantic recital! .....and compassionate too!
Thanx
I heavily appreciate your comments ~BRYCE