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Illuminated

Posted September 3rd, 2008 by Bryce E Coast

Reflected sunlight
Mirrors through the darkened space
Illuminating..
Warming the ravenous tears
That had drizzled cold for years

Bryce

On September 4th, 2008 lroconnell says:

Good for you for trying to help yourself and get through this tough time...{september}
I think you have said this quite nicely, my friend! sad, but I see a ray of hope.
Anytime you see a bit of sunlight, only good things can happen after that...
Linda :)
xoxo

Linda.. thanks

On September 6th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

Sorry for the late reply,., couldn't respond because i was on cellphone and didn't want to mess the format.. anyways thanks, i'll do a handfull this month and then take a break

Nice Bryce

On September 11th, 2008 PajamaMama says:

I just read this tanka and it's very fulfilling. I like the imagery of sunlight shining through a darkened space -kisses rebecca

Thanks Rebecca

On September 15th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

Muchy appreciated ~BRYCE

I liked this one Bryce

On September 11th, 2008 willow says:

A nice Tanka poem loved the words hugs from Willow

Thanks Willow

On September 15th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

Muchly Appreciated ~BRYCE

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