Night Goddess
Dark-haired goddess of the night held captive by her shores, sitting by the ocean docks while cold mascara pours
She feels so naked in the sunshine of the afternoon, and so she seeks for comfort on the darkside of the moon
Chasing off the loyal stars that twinkle in her sky, she huddles, for their noblety does only make her cry
The ashen from her hidden face still glimmers through the dark, upon her shoulder sings the alto of the black nightlark
She tears the stitches from her arms, to try and hush the devil- Who beckons her to do more harm, and end the painful revel
With every cord she rips away, i feel i'm bleeding too- I feel the pain in every way, of what she's going through.
If you could see how beautiful, how wonderful you are- I'd take you from this hidden place, my dearest friend.. my Dar
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perfect
Could not possibly be added to and it would be a sin to change any.or add.cept maybe music,which is ever available to all words,your growing to be one of my faves,if your words were spoken on the radio who knows?i do and thats my claim to fame this year!cheers,so i,d love to win an argument with some of my all knowing educated critics we are bothered with,me anyhow.You need only try you tube for a couple of hours and i bet you can put them into overdrive towards your signature,even talk shows on the radio,local like!you are not being appreciated by the ones who are desperate to read and hear a new Bard!cheers
thanx clydeseer
No i won't be making any changes or adjustments on it this time my good lad. I appreciate the great enthusiasmic praise as only sir clyde can bring »BRYCE
You are sensitive,perceptive
You are sensitive,perceptive and extremely gifted my friend...amazing write
Thankyou
For the nice complement and for taking time to read^ _ ^BRYCE
Realness!
Absolute Realness Bryce))-kisses rebecca
reflected kisses
I appreciate the thoughts and kisses as always »BRYCE
A beautiful
Thoughtful write to a friend , you have done it again Bryce a masterpiece here brilliant poem.
big hugs from Willow
Willow ^ _ ^
Thanks again for your steadfast support.. bearhugs from BRYCE