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Dusk in the Woodlands

Posted September 12th, 2008 by Bryce E Coast

Evening rays splinter..
Disco-lighting the woodlands
Lost in a daydream..
As leaves come tumbling down
Sailing on the golden stream..

Nice Tanka

On September 12th, 2008 raskin says:

visually the words are beautiful, set the scene. Also gives an emotional component as well. I really liked this. Lost in a day dream that line makes this pop. raskin

Thanks Again Rask..

On September 12th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

But, I'm not as fluid with these as you guys are ~BRYCE

I liked this one

On September 12th, 2008 willow says:

Bryce I have never written a tanka yet maybe one day I will try my luck at it .you did well with yours though good words hugs from Willow

thanx Willow

On September 13th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

Yea.. haikus are not really my kinda deal, but i will always try a tanka any day of the week ~BRYCE

Niceun

On September 13th, 2008 PajamaMama says:

Very peaceful and serenic tanka bryceyboy ))-rebecca

Dear Mama

On September 13th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

Thank ye for your infinite comments »BRYCE

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