Aurora Fields

With speculance.. beholds the eyes
As lucent sky unyields
An excellence.. as beauty lies
Out-stretched upon the fields.

Aurora dabs her magic dust
Upon the sleeping plains
As Nightingales, sing with the gust
Atop their sugar cains.

She spreads across
The pallid ground
Like brilliant rings of Saturn

Tingeing -
Darkened blades abound
Suffusing them with pattern

Colors ranging parallel,
Like ringlets on the water-
Wave-lengths traveling,
Set assail....
Like boy, who steals a daughter.

Sitting out beneath the elm,
Where fervent dreams reside -
Watching as she steers her helm,
Across the countryside.

Bootiful!

A beautiful write Bryce with glorious images. Iv'e seen the Aurora (Northern lights) over the Swedish skies, spiritual and powerful in equal measure!. I can hear this one as a song, and Love the first two lines especially!

Take care,

DEbs x

Your Comments R Bewt!

Thanks so much my friend for sharing your thoughts on this... it's always nice to look up and see a 1 under comments ^ _ ^ i'll fix the format later on--BRYCE

Bryce

There was certainly something conforting in the reading of this piece. Simple things can mean so much when given the proper notice.

Pete

Pete

That's What It's All About... Taking The Simple Things And Molding Beautiful Images Around Them. Thanks From BRYCE

I just found this

A beautiful write Bryce,I loved this one a very imaginative poem well written hugs from Willow

Willow..

Thanks once again my good friend ~BRYCE

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