Hello
Hello
Gentle early morning spring rain ceases,
Wild Bluebells sway discarding droplets,
Dawn chorus? It has yet to sound,
Wildlife remains in invisible slumbers,
There is wonderment in stillness,
Safety in the quietness,
A trusting Hedgehog peeks,
We say hello.
brighttack
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i love it! i read and
i love it! i read and re-read it, and i still love it! it just works. very nice. :)
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Brilliant write
this was Brilliant I loved it from start to finish a great nature poem ,
Bravo Brighttack you have just written a mastepiece, loved it hugs from Willow
Oh Dear
Willow I did write a sequel to this one for my booklet. It is called surprise surprise "Goodbye."
There is originality for you. I will post it up.
Take Care
brighttack
And Hello to you!
I love this poem Brighttack...It's adorable and very peaceful!
I like your style of writng poetry.
nice!!!
Linda