Traveling Partners
Our hearts thrill to one song
The tune--is it love?
No doubt, we can't be wrong
When from above.
The cheek you gently touch
The breath that blends with mine
Experiences of such
Are like fine wine
A dance of timeless length
Our eagle youth is back,
Glowing from One Strength
We have no lack.
Though ahead's a slippery road
Let me walk with You
Together bear the load:
A Home from two.
Thoughts--no need to dread
Spin like roundabouts,
But must not come to bed--
Permit no doubts.
The years to come are ours,
In God we take our stand
Traveling the stars
Hands in Hand.
By Brian 2009
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Since I am new to this - I do not know how to encourage anyone to comment on my poetry. I see that many read it, but I get very few comments -- in fact, none. Therefore, I will comment on my own -- smiling.
Can't help but smile
when someone comments on their own poem, maybe I should try that. Lovely rhyme, very sweet. raskin
Thank you -- I will pay you
Thank you -- I will pay you a visit too
Appreciated -- Blessings to you
a penny
Your heading was pretty funny, made me laugh when I saw it. Thanks. raskin
For your thoughts
Thanks Penny for the visit ... and your humorous thought
Brian
HEHE xx
awwww Brian, sorry for the not commenting thing, i hated that when i first came on here ...
i didnt realise how good a writer you actually are though x
this is an excellent love poem...so proffessional and neat
i enjoy less complicated poems like this that are easy to follow
thnx for posting
xx
Thank you Very Much
Thanks Snuggly Bug for the great comment and encouragement -- I also get a chance to read your Big Faint piece, and was amazed -- it was very entertaining to me
Thank you for looking in, and I will look in on yours too
Brian
Welcome to the "Showcase"!
I just wanted to use your poem to comment on my poem "I Owe You" :) ... Nice job Brian.. I especially liked the ending! Oh yeah... Welcome to the "Showcase"!
Ray AKA Yobarney