Dreams

(c) April 13, 2009

Close my eyes
want to cry no more.
Sleep now
let the dreams come.
Pain fading away
peace coming.

Sweet dreams

laughter and fun.
Dancing in the rain
playing in the sun.
Life is good
full of love.

Sleep on

don't wake up.
Riding in the car
strange turn.
Singing a song
having so much fun.
Sun turning dark

keep driving on.

Old house
peeling paint.
Hiding from each other
life is great.
Dark room
eerily quiet

too still.

What is coming
getting chills.
Angry pounding
don't open the door.

Dream no more.

Piercing screams
everyone gone.

What now

scratching in the walls.
No answers
grabbing on.
Dark turning red.

Wake up now

too late.
Try to fight
nails digging in.
Flesh peeling away
not going to win.

Hurting now

tears coming back.
Sun hitting my face.
Time to start
another day.

Deep

You think when I don't reply that I don't like them. That's not true! Since we are living together I voice my opinion over your works. I've always said and told you you have talent and you show it here very well. this is an incredible piece, well written. the imagery goes from light to dark back to the light. A very profound circle and a great read! I'm proud of you and love you bunches!~Ron

*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard

Yeah

what he said except for the love you bunches part :) ron

The only time I look down on another is when I am bending to help them up.

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