The Bat field
Once I knew a shaven headed boy
Who lived above a field
In a cottage behind field’s fences
Where he used to protect his land
Feet firmly on his earth
Halting us
When during day we played
On green no man’s land
During nighttime he was away
When we turned soldiers
Throwing stones and hitting bats
Above the field
Then one by one onto the ground
Ceremoniously into dirt
These bats were buried
And our field became a cemetery
Of graveyard stones that with a click
Mimicking and miming our adventurous minds
Took down a soldier looking boy
Who undisturbed and without a worry
was flocking sheep on vengeful battle ground.
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bat field
I could see a lot of metaphors being made of this. Perhaps the boy was a ghost?
; )
Hello you : ), yes indeed (also the boy was real)
really?
Wow. I thought he might be a ghost or something. You might want to check again. Sometimes ghosts can be very human-like. They can even go on computers and email people. I might even be a ghost and not know it. Damn, I'm kinda worried now. I'm going to call the psychic hotline to check and see if I'm a ghost. Maybe you should too.
haha
You're so crazy haha. Well, he might be now, but I wouldn't know ; )
Hey I'm new here...
loved this poem, the imagery was great and the theme flowed consistantly....It has a kind of under tone to it of the loss of innocence and the bats being buried and the stones becoming actual monuments, maybe lasting reminders/ guilt? anyhow thanks for a great read!
Thank you : )
Hey Katrina, welcome! : ) I'm very glad you liked it... ; ). Than you too! : ) Love, AC