This is probably your best (atleast in its poetic form) so far. A easy read, easily digested, and short enough to reread to collect any dangling thoughts. There were alot of good messages within this.
"theirs no changing without changing within" very true we can't expect the world to change if we are unwilling to change ourselves.
"no one man can make change" also incrediably true makes me think of Obama lol.
"we the people can win
once we stop this machine were in"
This part made me think, the machine could be a few things. Great line. All in all this was a good read, constructive vent, I hope you make more of these.
Side note: All showmember (espically the vetran ones) find it difficult to read all poems when new people post excessive amounts a day. Althought I am intrested in reading more. If you could cut back to three a day, that would make it more possible :) It would also encourage others to take the time to view the 2 or 3 you post a day.
"Were it not for shadows, we would learn to hate the light."