The Unknow Love

A heart is split in half
the love is burning deep within
can't understand this life
dose not understand why
this guy won't leave her head
yet she is with someone new
everything she dose she recalls him
see's him in her dreams and
whenever she closes her eyes
he is there beside her in the bed
whatever can this mean for her
the new love want's to come through
but she won't let it because of the love
she carries in her heart for the other
heart soar with love or maybe hate
who knows anymore all she wants is peace
peace with her soar heart and her mind
peace within her body, within everything
will this day ever come or will she live
with her heart split in half all her life

hi again, just thought I'd advise you once again....

A heart is split in half
the love is burning deep within
can't understand this life
dose*(does)* not understand why
this guy won't leave her head
yet she is with someone new
everything she dose*(does)* she recalls*(remembers)* him
see's him in her dreams and
whenever she closes her eyes
he is there beside her in the bed
whatever *can this*(could this) mean for her
the new love want's to come through
but she won't let it because of the love
she carries in her heart for the other
heart soar*(sore)* with love or maybe hate
who knows anymore all she wants is peace
peace with her soar*(sore)* heart and her mind
peace within her body, within everything
will this day ever come or will she live
with her heart split in half all her life.....hope you don't mind me pointing out, tell me to back off if I'm intruding.....: )......peace

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very good correct .. i think now is very sweet

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it all comes from the heart

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These mistakes you find are meant to be there for the simple fact of my writing, but thank you for noticing.

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