Seasons Change

these mottled mementos of a time past
blanket everything so damp and slimy
no longer cushioning my determined steps
as thousands keep slipping behind me.

glaring signs of past and what has been
unfortunate skeletons of what they were
coating imperfections each crack and hollow
now impervious to breeze they seldom stir.

They have no choice and do their duty
occasionally revealing yet unbiasedly covering all
From the precious treasure that I sought
to the stick or rock that made me fall.

once softly fluttering like bright butterflies
vibrantly twitering and swirling all around
they now lay quietly limply en masse
sodden decomposing piles on the ground

seasons change and time moves on
an aroma forms, accepted without fear
The healing effusion of dead and dying
abandoned memories of times held dear

This is worded very beutifuly

and although it seems as if you are putting memories behind you, it isn't very clear to me as to whether or not those memories have been good ones or bad ones. I hope it's the bad ones that your abandoning of course... I just never considered them soft and butterfly like. I thought they were more like daggers or stones.. so I'm confused. This is my favorite poem.

Geo

Sometimes in life there is a need for us to take a trip back through time and find abandoned memories but especially the truth beneath the memories.
Hopefully this clears some of the confusion.

oops

I must have clicked the button twice.

Nope...I'm still confused

So I'd like a full explication of this poem on my bed... uh hum.... I mean, in my inbox.. by the morning please.

dear miss wench

filling your inbox with a full explication truly piques my interest. However, I am jack of all trades and master of noone. I humbly acknowledge your training and expertise in producing such things far exceed mine. I think I may have some of the pieces you feel are missing, but you shouldn't roll over or give up so easily. don't miss out on an opportunity to improve your flexibility wrapping your mind around the entire meaning and in so doing have the much desired satisfaction of knowing the explication was produced by you and no-one else.

Hmmmph

*sigh*

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