your poems, and your comment on your bio... I like this poem, reminds me of a place my heart and soul visited every night, and how I had to drink just to numb the pain. Its part of my recent past, not as bad anymore but tonight is a little tough to deal with for I am reflecting on this pain, heartache and loneliness of it all. "Even a sigh echos out in silence" was the line that got to me. You asked about feed back, this poem seem to have strong emotion to it till I got to those last three lines, then it seem to lose it's flow. Look I am just telling you what I see, I am by far no poet, but I remember how much I wanted advice (and sometimes I got) on how to be a better writer. I am better, well, somewhat, but there are people on here that are really, really good. In my mind, songwriting is a form of poetry, the lyrics of so many songs seem to have helped get through the tough times, song writing is a gift. I did like this read and look forward to your future writes-Lee